With the darkness and the confusion pressing onto her mind, she wondered whether she can take another day, or should she end it once and for all! She just couldn't take the pain anymore.
She reached towards the object she was wistfully looking at, a sole spectator to her pain and also the sole mean to end her pain.
In her eagerness to end the pain, Agni thought -
"Damn the power cut!"
P.S. Author's note: This short tale was written as an ode to the light switch, curious to know your interpretation.
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The opening line was brilliant. Short and delightful read. Keep posting and making us readers excited and wanting more.
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DeleteThis is such an interesting read.. Loved the title :)
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DeleteThat was a fun read :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Pragnya
DeleteBrilliant starting and its such a fun read
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DeleteNicely stopped. It leaves the reader imagining the next moves in the story. Craving for more.
ReplyDeleteGlad u like it Geethica, what do you think it was about? ;)
DeleteWhat an interesting read leaving too many thoughts. Nice story
ReplyDeleteGlad u like it Arushi, what do you think it was about? ;)
DeleteYou have a wonderful way of creating the picture in your readers mind. Well-written!
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Thanks Noor :)
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ReplyDeleteHope it lived up to the expectation
DeleteVery well written with a good suspense element.
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Thanks Sindhu
DeleteI am quite intrigued to know what that object is? A torch light? A folding fan? Or something else?
ReplyDeleteThis made for a good read. Keep writing.
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It can be anything you want it to be Sur, I wrote this story for a light switch
DeleteAhh wow. Very well written. I just read twice to check if I missed anything ;)
ReplyDeleteHa ha - and what did you discover Kinshoo? ;)
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