What’s your Poison... She asked me
I replied, Pain
She seems disappointed with my answer.
I asked,
What’s yours?
She said...Love
Looking at my own reflection, I enquired,
How can it be? Aren’t we the same.
She smiled and said......NO
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Very deep. You've used such few words, to say so much. Brilliant!
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I wish I could wrote more, but I only have this much.
DeleteDeep and beautiful! Wow . Great job
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DeleteBeautiful poem...loved the analogy of poison and love..
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DeleteHatred can be my poison which I hope I have overcome
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DeleteFabulously put. This is so hard hitting despite using such less words.
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DeleteShort, crisp and deep! Well-written
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DeleteLove is pain but also a balm! Well, your lines are amenable to a lot of interpretations.
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DeleteVery nice one. Could be seen in various ways.
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DeleteI never understand how someone says so much in so few words ina poetry. Beautifully penned
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DeleteDeep, sweet and crisp. Very well written in just few words.
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DeleteThis touched my heart.. Deep and so well expressed in few lines.
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